In many counties, women and man are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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These days both genders are equal, woman and man
work
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full-
time
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job. Both of them have the same free
time
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for their family.
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essay will try to find out if they are e
qual
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equally
at
home
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as same as they are at
work
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. When you are working w
hole day
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the whole day
long, you have less
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to spend with your family.
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is the reason why parents try to finish their obligations as soon as possible.
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herefore they
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Therefore, they
are running
home
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after
work
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to be with their children as much as they can.
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, when they are at
home
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their
work
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day has not finished yet. Household tasks are waiting for them. In many homes
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is a frequently woman’s obligation. In our history it is traditional for a woman to be a housewife.
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herefore men
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Therefore, men
have more free
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when they come back
home
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than women. In m
odern life it’s
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modern life, it’s
normal to change
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way of living. Right now when women and men are becoming more and more equal, it’s necessary for them to share household tasks. Parents could divide tasks which are more and less physically difficult. More physically difficult tasks are for men and less difficult for women. Only in
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way they can help each other and spend more quality
time
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together. In conclusion, nowadays woman and man are becoming more equal than ever b
efore so
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before, so
it is necessary to share all tasks and chores because o
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of
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way the whole world will have more happier families and marriages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • fairness
  • burden
  • workforce
  • traditional gender roles
  • fostering teamwork
  • mutual respect
  • balanced division
  • family well-being
  • mental health
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