Many students are choosing not to study science in universities.what are the causes for that.what are the effects of that

University

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The university

should allow students to choose their subjects by their own, while some argue that useful subjects

such

as science and

technology

should be learnt as a compulsory course in University.In my opinion, students should be

learnt

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learning

the

course whatever

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course, whatever

they want. On the one hand, science and

technology

subjects are

also

important to gain more

knowledge

in their field. These qualifications open the door to better

job

opportunities.

For example

, if students have enough

knowledge

technology

or science, many famous companies

such

as oil companies

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car companies could employ them.

Furthermore

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without knowing

technology

, they can only find entry-level jobs, because

this

types

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type

of jobs does not require any skill or

knowledge

they

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They

can pursue their career by doing

internship

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an internship

to gain more experience,

then

they can find

high salary

Suggestion

a high salary job

high salary jobs

job

On the other hand

, I believe that University students should choose their favourite subject,

as a

result they

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result, they

shoud

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

be more creative and ambitious,

this

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result

thus

help them to make a quicker progress toward their academic and daily life

sucess

Suggestion

successful

success

successes

sucks

Furthermore if

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Furthermore, if

they have a enough

knowledge

and interest in their field, they become more self-reliant and responsible for their

job

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they work in

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oil company, they will be promoted more easily than expected due to their interest and motivation in their

job

For example

any

quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity

some

students work in a

google company

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google, company

however

, they majority of them give up easily due to lack of confidence and interest to their work. In conclusion, while there are some reasons believe that people should acquire more

knowledge

, my own view is that students always should choose any subject in University

Wed Apr 01 2020

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general