Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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History
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is very important for
primary school subject
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primary school subjects
because from these stage a student can learn about
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
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history what
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history, what
their grandfather and father did
,
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,
how they passed their old days.How they struggle to get
new one
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a new one
new ones
.
Firstly
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, from primary stage a student can learn about their own
county
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
by reading
historical story
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the historical story
historical stories
without it they
can not
can not
cannot
get any idea about
thier
of them or themselves
their
old
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older
generation.
Secondly
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, to be an ideal person he or she has to know about their old
historty
the aggregate of past events
history
,
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,
by knowing it he can a good lead in near future.Every nation
need
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needs
a
brave true
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brave, true
leader. If a student
learn
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learns
about his
history
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one day he will be a great decision maker he can lead the whole nation.Now a days we need
such
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type of leader who leads the whole world.
Furthermore
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, alongside about
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history
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the history
we have to know about
science
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and
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technolog
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
. Because now we are living a developed
country
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and
this
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country
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is being controlled by
science
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and
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technolog
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
. So we have to learn a lot about
this
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subject.If we follow the
country
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China, USA, Japan they are fast forwarding
country
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,
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,
they are using
Science
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explanation and for implementing
science
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using
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technolog
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
.
Thats
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That's
why they are moving forward
otherthan
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other than
any other
country
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. In
conclusion it
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conclusion, it
is very clear that at
first
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we have to learn old
history
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after knowing
this
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for improving our own position have to learn
science
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and
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technolog
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
. If we cope with
this
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we can be a great nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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