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Recent sureys show increased interest in relocation and travel to other countries. What may be the reason for this trend and will be the possible outcome from this behavior provide example for your opinion

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Nowadays moving
in
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into
to
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 countries is most popular among people because in other countries they provide more amenities. Recent research
show
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shows
has shown
 rise
prefer
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prefers
 in relocation and trip to other nations. I believe that moving other countries is beneficial for each and every
person
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, s
life
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 which I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs. Commence with reasons for
this
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trend there
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trend, there
 are umpteen
reason
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reasons
 of
this
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 statement
firstly
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 in their native nation cannot provide employment opportunities while people are
moving other countries
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moving to other countries
 because they provide
better
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better job opportunities
a better job opportunity
job
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 opportunity due to they get
better
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a better job
better jobs
job
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 in their
life
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as a
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result
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, they provide
better future
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a better future
to
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for
 their family.
Secondly
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number
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a number
 of individuals have
interest
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an interest
 in
learn
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learning
 something new due to they do travel in out of their
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country
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country, therefore
therefore
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 they
gain
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lot
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lots
 of
knowledge
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 about other countries'
culture
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 as well as other languages
as a
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result
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, they
gain
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lot
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lots
 of
knowledge
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 about all over the world. Considering the outcome of
this
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trend
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number
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 of people moving in other nations, because other countries provide better
job
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 opportunities due to they earn
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lot
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lots
 of
money
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. With the help of
money
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 they not only
fullfill
put in effect
fulfil
fulfilled
fulfils
 their all
needs but
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needs, but
also
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 they complete their family 's requirements.
As a
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result
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, they become successful in their whole
life
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.
Furthermore
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, if people move in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 states than they
seen
give a certain impression or have a certain outward aspect
seem
 to
number
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 of historical places due to
they
of them or themselves
their
gain
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lot
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 of
knowledge
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 about various
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culture
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cultures
 as well as learn new language so
therefore
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, they easily survive in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 countries
as a
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result
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, they not only become multicultural but
also
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 they become
multilanguasitic
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. To conclude, moving
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 countries
is far more beneficial for each and every
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lives far more beneficial for each and every person rather than
is far more beneficial for each and every person rather than live
person
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 rether than live in own
country
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in
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In
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 countries is most popular among people because in other countries they provide more amenities. Recent research
show
Suggestion
shows
has shown
 rise
prefer
Suggestion
prefers
 in relocation and trip to other nations. I believe that moving other countries is beneficial for each and every
person
Use synonyms
, s
life
Use synonyms
 which I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs. Commence with reasons for
this
Linking Words
Use synonyms
trend there
Accept comma addition
trend, there
 are umpteen
reason
Suggestion
reasons
 of
this
Linking Words
 statement
firstly
Linking Words
 in their native nation cannot provide employment opportunities while people are
moving other countries
Suggestion
moving to other countries
 because they provide
better
Suggestion
better job opportunities
a better job opportunity
job
Use synonyms
 opportunity due to they get
better
Suggestion
a better job
better jobs
job
Use synonyms
 in their
life
Use synonyms
as a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they provide
better future
Suggestion
a better future
to
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for
 their family.
Secondly
Linking Words
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number
Suggestion
a number
 of individuals have
interest
Suggestion
an interest
 in
learn
Suggestion
learning
 something new due to they do travel in out of their
Use synonyms
country
Accept comma addition
country, therefore
therefore
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 they
gain
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
lot
Suggestion
lots
 of
knowledge
Use synonyms
 about other countries'
culture
Use synonyms
 as well as other languages
as a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they
gain
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
lot
Suggestion
lots
 of
knowledge
Use synonyms
 about all over the world. Considering the outcome of
this
Linking Words
trend
Use synonyms
number
Use synonyms
 of people moving in other nations, because other countries provide better
job
Use synonyms
 opportunities due to they earn
Use synonyms
lot
Suggestion
lots
 of
money
Use synonyms
. With the help of
money
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 they not only
fullfill
put in effect
fulfil
fulfilled
fulfils
 their all
needs but
Accept comma addition
needs, but
also
Linking Words
 they complete their family 's requirements.
As a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they become successful in their whole
life
Use synonyms
.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, if people move in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 states than they
seen
give a certain impression or have a certain outward aspect
seem
 to
number
Use synonyms
 of historical places due to
they
of them or themselves
their
gain
Use synonyms
lot
Use synonyms
 of
knowledge
Use synonyms
 about various
Use synonyms
culture
Suggestion
cultures
 as well as learn new language so
therefore
Linking Words
, they easily survive in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 countries
as a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they not only become multicultural but
also
Linking Words
 they become
multilanguasitic
Suggestion
. To conclude, moving another countries is far more beneficial for each and every
person
Use synonyms
 rether than live in own
country
Use synonyms
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