children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion؟

Money is an important aspect in the

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of human beings. Having large amounts of money makes

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easier because

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, children would not work hard to receive higher education and

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, they will face problems regarding a secured career in the

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believe children brought up by rich parents will not be prepared to deal with the challenges faced in adulthood. Growing up in a wealthy family, a child will not grow to be diligent in school for higher education in the

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. Based on a study conducted at the University of Ohio, 85% of the children who received a Bachelor degree in 2017 are those who grew up with financial limitation. These graduates had to depend on themselves from an early age if they hoped for admissions in universities, they devote time and effort to get outstanding grades and scholarships so

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become independent and better prepared to deal with obstacles faced in adulthood.

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, children growing up in wealthy households will not worry about studying hard to receive a scholarship, as their parents will secure their higher education. These children will grow dependent on their parents and will not be able to deal with problems of adult

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. Depending financially on parents, children will face difficulties in obtaining a job in the forthcoming. Throughout their lives, children brought up by wealthy parents are often spoiled, do not need to work hard

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slack on gaining their own income. Whereas children growing up with low amount of money will thrive to get a well-paid career to help their parents and themselves.

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, billionaire football player Christiano Rinaldo grew up in a poor home, he had determined to help his parents and aspired for a better

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. In conclusion, I believe that children who grow up in rich households are not able to face challenges in adulthood, unlike those children who grow up with financial limitation. Children with limitation thrive to secure their

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and are well prepared for the adult

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