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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Leisure time in a typical week in hour - by sex and employment status, 1998-99.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Leisure time in a typical week in hour - by sex and employment status, 1998-99.
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The bar graph presents information on how many
leisure
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hours
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people
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 enjoyed per week by gender and employment status in
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the year
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year
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years
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 1998 and 1999.
Overall
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,
people
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 who were unemployed and retired had more free
time
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 than those
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who belonged
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belonged
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 to other categories. Based on the information provided in the bar chart,
people
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 who were
under
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 the working groups had less than 50
hours
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 of
leisure
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time
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 weekly,
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 the unemployed and retired groups had approximately 80
hours
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 of free
time
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 per week.
People
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 with a
full
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full-time
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time
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 job had the least amount of
leisure
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time
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. Among women’s working groups, housewives had the highest number of free
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, and both
full
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time
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part
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part-time
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time
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 women had around 40
hours
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leisure
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of leisure
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time
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 weekly. Comparing the number of
leisure
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time
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 by gender,
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the male
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male
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males
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 generally had more
leisure
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time
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 than
female
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females
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.
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 the graph did not provide the data related to
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a male
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male
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males
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 who had a
part
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part-time
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time
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 job or home-staying, the
full
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full-time
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time
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 employed, unemployed and retired
male
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males
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 had roughly 5
hours
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 more
leisure
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time
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 weekly than that
of
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apply
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female
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females
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Vocabulary: Replace the words leisure, hours, people, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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