The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Leisure time in a typical week in hour - by sex and employment status, 1998-99.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

Leisure time in a typical week in hour - by sex and employment status, 1998-99.
The bar graph presents information on how many
leisure
hours
people
enjoyed per week by gender and employment status in
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the year
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year
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years
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1998 and 1999.
Overall
,
people
who were unemployed and retired had more free
time
than those
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belonged
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to other categories. Based on the information provided in the bar chart,
people
who were
under
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the working groups had less than 50
hours
of
leisure
time
weekly,
while
the unemployed and retired groups had approximately 80
hours
of free
time
per week.
People
with a
full
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time
job had the least amount of
leisure
time
. Among women’s working groups, housewives had the highest number of free
time
, and both
full
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time
and
part
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part-time
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time
women had around 40
hours
leisure
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time
weekly. Comparing the number of
leisure
time
by gender,
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the male
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male
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males
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generally had more
leisure
time
than
female
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females
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.
Although
the graph did not provide the data related to
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a male
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male
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males
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who had a
part
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part-time
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time
job or home-staying, the
full
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full-time
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time
employed, unemployed and retired
male
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males
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had roughly 5
hours
more
leisure
time
weekly than that
of
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female
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females
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words leisure, hours, people, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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