Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

#say #music #art #drama #school #subjects #level

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S CULTURE IS VERY FAST AND GROWING SO BASED ON THAT THE COMPETITION IS

ALSO

IMPROVING SYMALTANEYOUSLY STRESS WILL ASLO INCRESING SO THAT NOW A DAYS PRIVATE INSTITUTION WILL OFFRTING AND INCLUDING MUSIC

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DRAMA

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ART AND CREFT IN CURRICULAM ACTIVITIES SO THAT CHILDREN ARE DEVELOP SKILLS

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I AM AGREE FOR THAT TO INCLUDING THAT TO ESSANCIAL LEVAL OF STARTING PHASE OF

EDUCATION

LEVAL REST IS BELIEVES THAT THE

EDUCATION

IS VERY IMPORTANT PILLER OF LIFE SO THEY ARE FOCUSING ONLY IN STUDIES NOT ANY OTHER ACTIVITIES

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THEY ARE BELIEVES THE OTHER ACTIVITIES IS WEST OF TIME AS WLL AS MONEY AND STUDENTS WHER DISTRACT FROM STUDIES

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THE INISTIONAL LEVAL OF THE

EDUCATION

THE STUDENT ONLY FOCOUS STUDIES NOT OTHER ACTIVITIES PUPILS ARE FUTURE OF FAMILY SO EVERY THEY ARE MORE ATTACHED WITH WHAT INSTUTITIONAL WILL OFFERING AND WHAT ACTIVITIES THEY ARE DOING

ON THE OTHER HAND

I AM BELIEVING THAT

EDUCATION

IS VERY IMPORTANT AND PRIMARY THING OF EVRY CITIZEN LIFE

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EVERY PERSON ARE FOCUSING IN

EDUCATION

THROUGH BUILDING CAREER OF HIS OR HER LIFE BUT THE OTHER CURRICUER ACTIVITIES IS

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VERY IMPORTANT BEACAUSE ONLY STUDIES IS IMPROVING LEVELS AND CHILDRES AND E DAY ENGEGE WITH BOOKS AND ASSIGNMENT SO THAT THEY ARE BOARD OR TO STICK ONLY IN BOOKS KNOLEDGE

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NOT IMPROVING THEIR EXTRA SKILLS BUT AFFECTS THEIR

EDUCATION

AND

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LOOSING BODY FITNESS SO THAT EXTRA ACTIVITIES IS IMPORTANT BEACAUS THE ARE DIVERTING THEIR MIND

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IMPROVING SKILLS AND BODY FITNESS

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TO CONCLUED THAT STUDIES IS IMPORTANT BUT

ALSO

ART

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CRAFT AND MUSIC IS EQUAL IMPORTANT IT BALANCE

EDUCATION

AND SKILLS SO THAT CHIDREN WHER LEARN AND ENYOY THE BOTH THINGS.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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277 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Some customers are increasely choosing to buy goods that are produces in their local area, rather than imported goods. What are the reason for this ? is this positive or negative trend

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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