Sending criminals to prison is not the best method at dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree.

No one in his life would like to be put into the terrible place called the

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prison which

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prison, which

deprives the liberty following conviction for a crime.

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institute provides not only isolation of criminals from society, but

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intended for retribution and rehabilitation of

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category of people. It is considered that after serving the sentence a prisoner is corrected

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in many cases

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judgment is erroneous. I strongly believe that inmates would be corrected better during scholarship and practice. Studying

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of punishment is a greater chance to gain new

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for convicts. In an education, a correcting person is focused on

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the study process

in order to acquire knowledge and skills which will be helpful for him during searching an appropriate

job

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after graduation.

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,

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of

imprisonment

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imprisonment, such

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student might gain a diploma degree.

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, the main idea of

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give an education to

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by putting an offender into a

prison

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will not be so suitable in comparison with educational purposes.

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, there cannot be a better chance to prepare for new life than practicing in a certain

job

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this criminals

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these criminals

this criminal

have a unique opportunity to acquire new experience in order to find

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job

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jobs

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ex-criminal lands a

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, it anchors them and their families and cements their place in their community what could lead to reducing of recidivism,

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. Meanwhile a

prison

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would not support

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opportunities for inmates making them even more embittered. To conclude, education and

job

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training better help criminal to become a law abiding person than sending them to

prison

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, I agree that a felon should study and practice

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of being

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put

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in

jail. If government wants to see criminals

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corrected, they

should give them a real base for starting of

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a new life

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