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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

#people #job #satisfaction #security
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It is observed that people have different opinion about
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job
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the job
. From some people's perspective
,
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,
job
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satisfaction
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 should be given priority when compared to
job
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 security while others assert that it is difficult to feel satisfied always
,
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,
instead
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 permanent
job
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 should be preferred. On the
one
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 hand,
job
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satisfaction
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 may be important in many aspects. Nowadays people spend a great deal of their time in their workplace. So, if they do not like their
job
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,
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 it could stress them out and lead to many health problems.
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 to
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, without
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satisfaction
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 people may become depressed and less motivated. These can affect people's work efficiency. If people are happy with their
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, they are
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 happy with their personal life.
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, people want to go for a secure
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 for many reasons
.
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 Having a
job
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one
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 loves is
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 thing
,
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 but if that
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 does not pay enough to allow a person to raise a family, pay debts, have his or her own home,
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 it is not very good at all. Usually, people need regular income for
fullfilling
put in effect
fulfilling
 their needs and a permanent
job
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 means a regular flow of money.
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,
job
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 security places a predominant position in these days. In conclusion, I believe that both
job
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satisfaction
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 and
job
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 security are important for a happy
proffesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
 life. Without
one
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, another
one
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 may become meaningless.
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