You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates program schedule Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups

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Dear Sir /Madam, My name is Sujith and I’m writing regarding the upcoming

seminar

to be held in Singapore,

this

year. I work as a general manager at an aerospace company and the content of

this

seminar

will provide me with the expert knowledge valuable for my role. As I live in Singapore and it will be easier for me to attend. I would like to get some information about the

seminar

such

as the duration of the symposium (including the exact dates), materials to be carried to the

seminar

hall and the essential identity papers to be presented.

Secondly

, I would like to know the sections or the schedule of the discussion, including the speakers, each day who will be taking classes, and their timings.

Lastly

, I would like to get some information on

seminar

fees, as well as the costs of meals, if you are providing like refreshments. My company will be paying for these.

However

, I need to prepare an estimate in order to get approval to participate in

this

forum.

In addition

, if any of my friends from other firms

wishes

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to participate, will there be any discounts? It would be great if you could help me with my queries at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Sujith

Thu Apr 02 2020

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