In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, the government does not interfere too strictly in the design and construction of new houses,
therefore
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many houses in some cities were built in their own styles.
Although
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there could be some drawbacks over
this
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issue, I believe the benefits of
this
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trend overtake the drawbacks depends on the areas where buildings are
constucted
make by combining materials and parts
constructed
. On one hand, too many
free-style
a race (as in swimming) in which each contestant has a free choice of the style to use
freestyle
frosty
houses might be a problem in some areas. Places where
buildings
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building
designs
serve
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serves
particular purposes,
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, to reflect a local
areas
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area
cultural and historic values.
For example
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Hoi
An
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A
- an ancient town in Viet Nam that remain an
excetionally
to an exceptional degree
exceptionally
well-preserved example of a Far Eastern port and has become a UNESCO World Heritage which needs to be
preserve
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preserved
. If contemporary houses are built here, they will destroy the aesthetic values will be
destroy
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destroyed
.
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,
such
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places need clear laws and appropriate sanctions for those who break the law.
However
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, the
free-style
a race (as in swimming) in which each contestant has a free choice of the style to use
freestyle
frosty
house still
bring
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brings
back so many
benefit
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benefits
.
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, it will enhance economic chances.
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, the Bitexco tower in Ho Chi Minh city was designed in its own and unique way, it still
atracts
direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes
attracts
attract
thousands of tourists both inside and outside the country every year. Another benefit is that different type of houses will create
an
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a
unique style of each
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
leads to the
cities'
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city's
aesthetic diversity. People always look for unique attributes or strange destination to visit. In conclusion, whether the advantages
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighed
the disadvantages on little control of designing houses, they all need to depend on the purposes of each
areas
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area
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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