Some people say it is important to keep home and your workplace tidy,with everything organized and in the correct place.

According to some people organizing things and put them in their exact
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a point located with respect to surface features of some region
place
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peace
is important and useful.It seems to me that it is correct for most
things not everything
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things, not everything
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the neat and tidy home and workplace will make us have fresh feel every moment.
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right
place
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will have to
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spend thoughtlessly; throw away
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wait
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a lot of time looking for them.
For instance
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there are many people can describe at least one case when they had to spend hours searching for their keys or wallet.
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if important financial and necessary health document
are not kept
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is not kept
in the
right
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The
consequences can be disastrous.Obviously there are several advantages to keeping things organised.
On the other hand
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not everything has to be kept in its
right
place
at all times.
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Actually, when
it comes to things we use frequently
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keeping them in a
place
where we can find them easily is more important than keeping them in their exact
place
.
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summarise, I
believe that it is
important to keep most
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most important to keep
things organized
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because organization makes it easy to find them.
However certain
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However, certain
things that we use often do not have to be in their
right
place
at all time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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