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Many facts related to sexual orientation have been brought before the ECtHR. Different articles
have been relied
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have been relying
 on while these facts were submitted to the Court. The
Article
 14 of
ECHR
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the ECHR
, in which prohibition of discrimination is encompassed, is one of the articles for alleged violations.
In addition
,
Article
 3 in which prohibition of torture is,
Article
 6 in which the
right
 to a fair trial is,
Article
 8 in which
the the
definite article
the
right
 to respect for private and family life is,
Article
 10 in which freedom of expression is,
Article
 11 in which the
right
 to freedom of assembly and association is;
Article
 12 in which the
right
 to marry is;
Article
 13 in which the
right
 to an effective remedy is and
Article
 1 of Protocol No.1 in which protection of property is defined are other articles which have been relied on for the facts related to discrimination on
basis
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the basis
 of sexual orientation. In cases in which the applicant’s claim is justified, “regulations and practices in other Council
states
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state
”, “consensus among Council states”, “international developments”, “the Convention as a living document” are some terms mentioned. As the
applicant’a
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applicant’s
applicants
applicant
 claim is not justified, “no common approach”, “margin of appreciation”, “ill-founded” and “the fact that the
isssue
prepare and issue for public distribution or sale
issue
issues
issuer
 was examined on the basis of another
article
” are some terms mentioned.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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