The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided illustrations compare the proportion of authorities spending in nine aspects of life in the
years
2010 and 2015.
Looking Use synonyms
initally
Correct your spelling
initially
to
the pie charts, it can be seen that the local administration had to cut down Change preposition
at
expense
in most areas to sponsor Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
for
the cost of welfare and borrowing. Meanwhile, there was still Change preposition
apply
a
stability in the percentage of Remove the article
apply
retirement
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the retirement
fund
and others over the period of 5 Fix the agreement mistake
funds
years
.
At the beginning of the period, the government Use synonyms
spending
money in Wrong verb form
spent
four
largest fields, including education, healthcare, pensions and defence. Correct article usage
the four
Nevertheless
, most of these sectors were Linking Words
slight
decline at least by 1% after 5 Correct article usage
a slight
years
. Particularly, education and defence funds made up 24% and 17% in 2010, and these figures fell by 3% in 2015. Use synonyms
Besides
, the pensions had no change in Linking Words
the
proportion from 2010 to 2015.
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apply
In contrast
, interest Linking Words
on
borrowing, transport, culture and leisure and others are the smallest payment in the Change preposition
in
years
2010. In these Use synonyms
area
, transport and culture expense Fix the agreement mistake
areas
considerable
decrease by two Change the word
considerably
third
for each Linking Words
ones
after Change to a singular noun
one
5-year
period. Add an article
a 5-year
the 5-year
Conversely
, welfare and interest on borrowing had a Linking Words
rapidly
growth Change the adverb
rapid
nearly
Change preposition
of nearly
double
in Wrong verb form
doubled
term
of percentage during 5 Fix the agreement mistake
terms
years
.Use synonyms
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