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As global trade increases,many goods , including those we use on daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distance. Do the benefit of this trends outweigh its drawback?

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Universal import and export of goods have been practised since long.
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 is a great culture in terms of experiencing foreign products without putting much effort, as these are available at doorstep these days. In my opinion,
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 trend is nice to have a sense of sharing cultures.
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,
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 products are sometimes a better alternative for a lot of goods that we use daily.
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, through
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 type of trading, many articles which are not available in the home country are available easily to all.
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, I used to eat peanut butter daily, but the product
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 available in my city does not have the essential ingredients, while, the imported peanut butter from another country is full of nutrients and healthy fats.
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,
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 trading should be limited as per the necessity, because of which local manufacturers will
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 feel comfortable. Other side importing goods is that, because these are transported far away from different countries, it slightly increases the overall cost, but that can be managed by the consumers as they are getting better option sometimes.
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, if I am spending money without getting satisfied, I would happily pay little extra for a better service in that situation.
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 trading has many advantages as compared to its drawbacks which are managed by most of us. In conclusion, increase in foreign trade improves the trading culture and provide more alternatives of a single option to the customers.
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, the imported article might be slightly expensive, but one will happily pay little extra for something better.
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