Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

The diagrams illustrate the transformations of the Grange
Park
from 1920 to today. It is obvious that significant changes have been taken in
this
park
. Overall, with the rearrangement of sitting areas, it allows people to have a good place to relax and enjoy all the constructions of the
park
. In the middle of the
park
a fountain is replaced by a rose garden surrounded by the seats, which were scattered around the
park
in 1920. To the west of it, an
amphitheater
a sloping gallery with seats for spectators (as in an operating room or theater)
amphitheatre
for concerts is rebuilt from the stage for musicians and there is a disappearance of the rose garden on the south-west of the
park
. On the northeast of the
park
, a café and a children’s play area are reconstructed from the rose garden and the pond for the water plant, respectively. On the southeast of the
park
, the glass house has been turned into a water feature.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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