Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are important than history. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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There is no denying that in school
history
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science
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and
technology
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are crucial
subject
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Each
subject
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plays
a
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an
important role and provides knowledge which can be optimized in different fields of life and Jobs
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There are some people that suggest
history
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is
most important
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a most important subject
the most important subject
subject
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in school while others suggest that
science
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and
technology
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modules are important. On the one hand
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,
history
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is a crucial
subject
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not only it teaches us about the cultures
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,
heritage
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important details and events in past and pristine times
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For
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example events
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example, events
like great
war
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of
panipat
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Panipat
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world
war
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1 and 2 some civil
war
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Moreover it
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Moreover, it
also
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teaches us about the different business economical and social techniques which were used by people in the past
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With all these knowledge children always can learn about their roots and
hereditry
occurring among members of a family usually by heredity
hereditary
heredity
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People like Sashi Tharoor and Captian
amarinder
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Singh are
both
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historian and have vast
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
of
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history
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the history
of Literature and
war
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respectively and
both
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have represented
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
on
international level
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an international level
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Prevously
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Previously
Shashi Tharoor Lead the Indian Group of Students for debate and
challenge competition
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the challenge competition
in Oxford university of London in English.
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On
the other hand
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,
science
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and
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technology
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technology, both
both
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are important subjects in
21st century
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the 21st century
as they are playing a major role in todays
economic
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economy
and global developments of nations. While these
both
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subjects require a good base and knowledge
to begin
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with and after
that students
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that, students
could harness and use that
knowlegde
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
in different fields like
ressearch
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
researched
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thesis
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Some of the famous
science
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and
technology
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students today are changing
world
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the world
like Elon Musk. To conclude
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
frimly
with resolute determination
firmly
believe that these three subjects are fully required for overall growth in academic and
generally
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general
. To know about ourself and our
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history we
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history, we
must need to learn
history
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and to develop more and keeping growing we need
science
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and
technology
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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