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Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

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Only by improving public
transportation
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 can we reduce
traffic
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 jam in numerous cities. In fact, the population of big cities
are
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is
 more crowded, a large of number people move
in
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from
 inner – city to
live lead
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live, lead
to
being one more than one
two
 streets are often overcrowded with insufficient infrastructure
traffic
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 causing the
traffic
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 jam.
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, people have to tend to use private vehicles more than public
transport
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 because it is the easiest way to move in a small road and time flexibility. The government should focus on the quality of public
transport
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 to people who believe that public
transport
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 is more convenient and useful. If there is comfortable and cheap public
transportation
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such
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 as buses and metro, they will choose to use it rather than drive.
another
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Another
 measure to reduce
traffic
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 is to impose a heavy tax on private vehicles or charge the
congestion
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 fee.
This
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 will discourage people from driving
into
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in
 the
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
Center
 city lead to limit the use of private vehicles and raise money for public
transportation
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 to improve the quality of public
transport
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.
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, In London there is a
congestion
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 charge of 11.5 dollars per day for every car going to the city in business hours. In conclusion,
Traffic
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congestion
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 is an
emergency
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emerging
 issue and we can be tackled the
traffic
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 problem by improving public
transportation
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 and charge the
congestion
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 fee.

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