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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#companies #employees #work #home #development
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We are a developing country and we are making marks in many fields. By using advanced technology or by adapting certain working methods of developed
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a developed country
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 of the trending ways which rich continents are using is
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working
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. It's booming in many ways. In my opinion, working from
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 is
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 of the good ways with multiple good points and few bad
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ice activity in the house is more productive. " Flexibility"
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 can
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 as per their
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 and complete the task. We can manage other activity with office
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. The main motive of office is to complete the
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. How and when that's is not judged. "Productivity" When you
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home, you
rgetic and willingly the
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 is completed as you have more
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 and energy. And with your own schedule and hours
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 does not feel, he or she is trapped in the same
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 zone. "More
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" As travelling is saved, There is more
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 available for doing more
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. "Less Pollution" As working from
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, Saves fuel, which helps in doing less air pollution. There are few drawbacks too. As there are always two sides of a coin.
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, " Taking Granted" people believe that working from
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 means they can do whatsoever they want and they are not being monitored. " No punctuality" they do not manage
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 and delay
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. To conclude, I personally believe that, few drawbacks happen when people are not mature and they do not understand the value of
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 and chance they have received. When
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 opportunity is used in the correct manner it can lead to a very successful journey.

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