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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#companies #employees #work #home #development
We are a developing country and we are making marks in many fields. By using advanced technology or by adapting certain working methods of developed
country.
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developed countries
a developed country
One
 of the trending ways which rich continents are using is
work
 from
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working
home
. It's booming in many ways. In my opinion, working from
home
 is
one
 of the good ways with multiple good points and few bad
one
's.I shall be discussing more on
this
 topic in below paragraphs.
To begin
 with,Doing of
f
Accept space
,
ice activity in the house is more productive. " Flexibility"
one
 can
work
 as per their
time
 and complete the task. We can manage other activity with office
work
. The main motive of office is to complete the
work
. How and when that's is not judged. "Productivity" When you
work
 from
home
 you
are ene
Accept comma addition
home, you
rgetic and willingly the
work
 is completed as you have more
time
 and energy. And with your own schedule and hours
one
 does not feel, he or she is trapped in the same
time
 zone. "More
Time
" As travelling is saved, There is more
time
 available for doing more
work
. "Less Pollution" As working from
home
, Saves fuel, which helps in doing less air pollution. There are few drawbacks too. As there are always two sides of a coin.
For instance
, " Taking Granted" people believe that working from
home
 means they can do whatsoever they want and they are not being monitored. " No punctuality" they do not manage
time
 and delay
work
. To conclude, I personally believe that, few drawbacks happen when people are not mature and they do not understand the value of
time
 and chance they have received. When
this
 opportunity is used in the correct manner it can lead to a very successful journey.

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