Climate change is an issue. Do you agree with this?

I think people just want to feel pleasure when they decide to celebrate something. Going to a restaurant and having delicious dishes
are
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is
a way to feel that. I think both are popular in my
country
, but if we look at
big cities
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the big cities
, residents of these cities generally prefer order foods from fast food restaurants. I don'
t
think
this
assumption is always true. Sometimes you may pay much money at a restaurant of which dishes didn'
t
taste good to you.
This
probably means that it costed much not because the dishes were tasty, but because it is a well-known restaurant. I think thanks to the globalisation and the technology, more and more different foods can be produced and dispatched to markets so I think in the future we have more options of foods than we have now. I think thanks to
technology we
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technology, we
can now produce foods in a more efficient way.
For example
, in even very
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, even in very
large agricultural lands crops can be collected via technological vehicles in a short time.
For
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In
normal times, I don'
t
think it is very important for a
country
to produce all what it consumes, but under extraordinary conditions, a
country
may not able to import foods from different
countries so
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countries, so
a
country
should keep in mind that the import may not be possible under
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
circumstances. For
this
reason, countries should have ability to produce what they consume. I don'
t
care if I have flowers
at
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in
my home. They look and smell nice, but
on the other
hand they
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hand, they
can consume oxygen in nights,
therefore
you better keep
flowers
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the flowers
outside where you sleep. I wouldn'
t
go anywhere to buy flowers. In
this
age, we no longer need to
go a florist
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go to a florist
to buy some flowers. I can order some flowers online. The
first
reason that comes to my mind is that we buy flowers when we want to celebrate someone for a specific reason.
For example
, Flowers can be bought to give mothers to celebrate their mother's day. I don'
t
think flowers are very important in my culture, but we
too give
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give
to give
flowers to someones for celebrating something, thanking for something.

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