Transporting large amounts of food to richer countries from the developing world is having an impact on air pollution and climate change. Some people say such imports should therefore be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In the
last
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decades, the population growth rate is increasing dramatically, and
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growth has created many needs in human societies.
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, many governments do not have the potential to produce the necessary
food
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for their people so
thy
people in general
they
must seek help from other countries and the transfer of the
food
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can lead to some disadvantages like negative impact on eco-system of these countries.
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, indiscriminate harvesting and indiscriminate killing of animals for
food
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production have a lot of negative effects on the eco-system.
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, many African countries are
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a valuable resource
for many years, and when people see their condition right now not only, they have economic problems, but
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plenty of unique plant and animal species have become extinct.
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this
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This
can be considered as one of the irreparable traits to the environment.
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food transportation
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food, transportation
requires the use of fossil fuel.
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,
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fossil fuel consumption can lead to air pollution
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harmful
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to
natural environment
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the natural environment
.
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, transporting the huge amount of
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needs thousands number of tools to transfer
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as many planes and ships trailers and other vehicles. So, each vehicle can make a little air pollution and sum of these
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amounts
can make a huge air pollution which can lead to destroy the Ozon layer. In conclusion,
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many people believe that the
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food transportation
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food, transportation
can help to people to save themselves, but in my opinion the eco-system is
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the most important things
in human life
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So, regarding to thrive
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on
technology the governments can use their own countries to support their people for
food
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and meet their needs.

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