In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I agree that very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV in many countries. A lot of factors that caused that.
First
, young people tend to have
interest
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an interest
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things that different with the adult. They
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are more loving
to read
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watch or talk about something that happening, "hits" word that they usually used. Fashion, technology, and gossip are more interesting for them than news. They think reading or watch TV is for adult or old people, they eased to get bored when talked about
news
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the news
. Lifestyle and creative thing
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are
more interesting for young people
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because they can chat with their friends about these
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themes
. Beside that, young people in
this
generation love to become
enterpreneur
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an entrepreneur
entrepreneur
entrepreneurs
so they more interesting to follow about things that have
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connected
with that Topic. Another reason that seems
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to become
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the reason
why young people don't have interesting to follow newspapers or news on tv are
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and social media. Young people more interested to follow, play, and update Topic in social media like
Instagram
, Twitter, and Facebook. They spent almost their time to
play social media
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play in social media
. For them, 'it's their life' and life is
bored
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boring
without Twitter and
Instagram
. Not easy to make
millenial
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millennial
millennials
interested in news. But with creativity and used of social media,
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think it's possible. Newspapers company or TV now used another technology
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like YouTube and
Instagram
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that's
being accessed by a lot of young people. They make content about news and upload that on YouTube or
Instagram
so young people interested to read and follow the news. And that strategy
tend
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tends
to more effective to persuade young people.

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