Write a letter to an English-speaking friend In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news

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Dear Peter, I hope you are doing well.
I’m
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sorry for not being in touch with you
from
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for
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last
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the last
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six months.
I’m
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writing
this
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letter to let you know that I have changed my
job
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recently and moved to Bangalore city from Mumbai. I hope you remembered our
last
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conversation when we spoke
last
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time over the phone where I mentioned that I need to look for
new
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a new
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job
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as I was looking forward to
settle
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down in Bangalore city.
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Moreover
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it was difficult for me to balance
professional
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my professional
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and personal life in
previous
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my previous
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organization due to long working hours and
also
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the pay was not great. I started searching for
new
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a new
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job
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, attended many interviews and
finally
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I got
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job
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a job
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offer letter from the current employer on
15th
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of
last
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month. So I had resigned from my previous
job
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immediately and accepted the new
job
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offer. My current company is an amazing one to work and it is
the
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one of the fortune 500 companies in the world. I got a good remuneration which is 30% more compared to previous company offered and there are many employment benefits being offered by
this
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company. I have been given
job
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designation as Tech Lead and
I’m
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leading 8 members of the team on
technical
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the technical
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front.
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extremely happy and excited with my current role in the organization which would allow me to grow in
people
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the people
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management area along with technical skills. I would like to inform you that I have purchased
new
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car
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week and I have started making youtube videos on stock market investments to share my finance domain knowledge
to
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with
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others.
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planning to take a vacation with my family probably
on
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next
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to
next
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month. How
the
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apply
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things are back home in New York? Looking forward to
hear
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from you soon. Warm wishes, Rajesh.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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