Write a letter to an English-speaking friend In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news
Dear Peter,
I hope you are doing well.
I’m
sorry for not being in touch with you from
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for
last
six months. Correct article usage
the last
I’m
writing this
letter to let you know that I have changed my job
recently and moved to Bangalore city from Mumbai.
I hope you remembered our last
conversation when we spoke last
time over the phone where I mentioned that I need to look for new
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a new
job
as I was looking forward to settle
down in Bangalore city. Change the verb form
settling
Moreover
it was difficult for me to balance Add a comma
,Moreover
professional
and personal life in Correct pronoun usage
my professional
previous
organization due to long working hours and Correct pronoun usage
my previous
also
the pay was not great. I started searching for new
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a new
job
, attended many interviews and finally
I got job
offer letter from the current employer on Add an article
a job
the job
15th
of Correct article usage
the 15th
last
month. So I had resigned from my previous job
immediately and accepted the new job
offer.
My current company is an amazing one to work and it is the
one of the fortune 500 companies in the world. I got a good remuneration which is 30% more compared to previous company offered and there are many employment benefits being offered by Change the article
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this
company. I have been given job
designation as Tech Lead and I’m
leading 8 members of the team on technical
front. Add an article
the technical
I’m
extremely happy and excited with my current role in the organization which would allow me to grow in people
management area along with technical skills.
I would like to inform you that I have purchased Correct article usage
the people
new
car Add an article
a new
last
week and I have started making youtube videos on stock market investments to share my finance domain knowledge to
others. Change preposition
with
I’m
planning to take a vacation with my family probably on
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apply
next
to next
month.
How the
things are back home in New York? Looking forward to Correct article usage
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hear
from you soon.
Warm wishes,
Rajesh.Change the verb form
hearing
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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