The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph above
depict
Change the verb form
depicts
average
and the future prediction of birth and death in a specific region Correct article usage
the average
during
a hundred years.
It’s clear from the chart that the Change preposition
over
numbers
of people who are living Fix the agreement mistake
number
is
gradually increased during the period between 1901 and 1961 as the range of born people reached a peak. To illustrate , the averageUnnecessary verb
apply
1
and it will start to Add a missing verb
is 1
steady
drop again .of born have been gradually increasing Change the word
steadily
as
it had a peak in 1961 ,Correct word choice
since
then
the number starts to fall again ,the same happen
in the number of dead people which is used to increase in the past till it will reach a significant point in 2061.
Change the verb form
happens
Overall
the number of born and death increase and will be higher in the future.Submitted by zanamarwan91 on
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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