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The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) what activities they participated in. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates the percentage of Scottish people aged 16 and above that undertook certain activities. On the whole, the table show
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 that all
age
 groups are quite active. Over 60% of all
age
 groups were taking part in at least one activity. The most active
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 group
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 the 16-24
year
 olds, with 79% of people surveyed completing at least one activity. The most popular interest
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in
this
age
 range was visual arts, which stood at 30% of young adults participating in
this
 activity. The lowest recorded participation was “computer based” which stood at 10% - the highest across the three
age
 groups. Crafts and sightseeing stood at 11%
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 writing was slightly higher at 17%. In the two
age
 groups, 25-44 and 45-74, crafts and sightseeing were the most popular choices for activities, scoring between 17% to 22%, a much higher rate of participation than the 16-24
year
 olds. For 25-44
year
 olds, writing was the lowest at 6%. Comparatively, in the 45-74
year
 olds, writing and computer based activities were the lowest in participation with 5% of people undertaking these activities for each hobby.
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