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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

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These
day
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days
 more and more people start doing extreme events
such
 as bungee jumping and
paragliding
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Paragliding
.
This
 essay
first
 will discuss reasons of
this
 trend and
finally
 argue whether it is a good idea to do. In my opinion, there are two reasons for why people undergo
such
 risks like that,
first
 is being addictive of adrenaline. Some people just cannot be away from extreme life because they see these kind of activities as the most addictive drugs
such
 as cocaine.
For example
, one of my
friend
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friends
 who lives in
US
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the US
 is an addictive person
to
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with
 the crazy activities. If he stays away from these kinds of events, immediately start sweating and cannot do his
daily
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day
 jobs.
Second
 is problems that people have to face push them to do these extreme things since in their lives they trying to go through some serious hardships that's why getting closer to the death make them forget about the problems and they see these utmost activities as a relief. When it comes to the talk about whether it is a good idea doing intense activities or not, I think they are horrible activities to do if you do not want to die. Even though they say the gears and gadgets that are used are the safest, it
is
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was
 hard to trust man made equipment's because 5 years ago in my hometown a man lost his life when he was climbing to a mountain. In the
video tapes
a video recording made on magnetic tape
videotapes
 that I watched, it can be clearly seen that when he was
on
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in
 the middle of the mountain, suddenly the rope ripped off and he
felt
cause to fall by or as if by delivering a blow
fell
 down
on to
to on
onto
 the rocks. After I saw that video I could not even hike for a long time. When all things are considered, these days people want to experience extreme activities like climbing because of addiction and forgetting about problems.
However
, being too much close to the death is not a good idea.

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