PROPOSITION: Sending criminals to prison is not an eecve method of dealing with them. Educaon and job training should be used instead. PROMPT: To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the rapid changing world nowadays, oppression and

use

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the use

of in

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uenal powers

does exist

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do exist

which somemes leads to un-lawful act that may lead to imprisonment. People have argued if pu*ng criminals to

jail

is not

eecve

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an eecve way

the eecve way

way

of dealing with

them

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them, hence

hence

,

educaon

and

job

training must be applied to them.

This

writer will discuss the dilemma and an opinion will be added on the la+er.The isolaon of the fugives in the

jail

were used since from the beginning of me, and it is indeed an eecve

way

of dealing with them decreasing the rate of crime in the said

era

a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)

area

. In the long run, the capve will be set

free but

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free, but

sll its capability is the same as the moment before it was imprisoned due to the facts that the wardens did not assist the

person

to change

it

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

way

dealing with the world,

thus

pu*ng the fugive into the

jail

is not an eecve

way

of dealing with them.

However

, proper

educaon

and

job

training will lure them out from the

oppressionand

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oppression and

will empower them to have jobs and community involvement

thus

making them a good cizen. Since most of the fugives belong to the grassroots communies, forcing them to live in the unlawful manner in able to put food on the table, they are forced to steal and somemes uneducated people put the jusce in their hands thereby killing

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

person

or simply hurng them out of anger. Pu*ng up the

person

in

jail

does not change their ways in how to deal with the world, their rights and responsibilies must be inculcated to them due to the fact that it will just be

unending cycle

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an unending cycle

of in-and-out from the prison. If recommendaons were to be given,

educaon

and

job

training should be free

bothprisoned

or not to be a producve part of the country,

then

the fugives will have a

job

a/

er

a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters

are

air

being released from imprisonment. The fugives will sll be

imprisoned but

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imprisoned, but

will be having the

job

training inside the facility of correcon. Making them useful by giving them jobs to support them 0nancially when they are freed and sll pu*ng the good harmony in the correcon, ergo a win-win situaon. A good example will be the In conclusions, the writer believes that,

educaon

and livelihood programs

empowers

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empower

the

person

and refrains from doing bad by abiding the law and implemenng it the right

way

, thereby reducing the crime rate of the naon, in

thelong

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the long

run incarceraon will be

of

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in

need