PROPOSITION: Sending criminals to prison is not an eecve method of dealing with them. Educaon and job training should be used instead. PROMPT: To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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do exist

which somemes leads to un-lawful act that may lead to imprisonment. People have argued if pu*ng criminals to

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is not

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an eecve way

the eecve way

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of dealing with

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them, hence

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and

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training must be applied to them.

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writer will discuss the dilemma and an opinion will be added on the la+er.The isolaon of the fugives in the

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were used since from the beginning of me, and it is indeed an eecve

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of dealing with them decreasing the rate of crime in the said

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. In the long run, the capve will be set

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free, but

sll its capability is the same as the moment before it was imprisoned due to the facts that the wardens did not assist the

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to change

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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

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dealing with the world,

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pu*ng the fugive into the

jail

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is not an eecve

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of dealing with them.

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, proper

educaon

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and

job

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training will lure them out from the

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oppression and

will empower them to have jobs and community involvement

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making them a good cizen. Since most of the fugives belong to the grassroots communies, forcing them to live in the unlawful manner in able to put food on the table, they are forced to steal and somemes uneducated people put the jusce in their hands thereby killing

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any of various alternatives; some other

another

person

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or simply hurng them out of anger. Pu*ng up the

person

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in

jail

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does not change their ways in how to deal with the world, their rights and responsibilies must be inculcated to them due to the fact that it will just be

unending cycle

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an unending cycle

of in-and-out from the prison. If recommendaons were to be given,

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and

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training should be free

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or not to be a producve part of the country,

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the fugives will have a

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being released from imprisonment. The fugives will sll be

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imprisoned, but

will be having the

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training inside the facility of correcon. Making them useful by giving them jobs to support them 0nancially when they are freed and sll pu*ng the good harmony in the correcon, ergo a win-win situaon. A good example will be the In conclusions, the writer believes that,

educaon

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and livelihood programs

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empower

the

person

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and refrains from doing bad by abiding the law and implemenng it the right

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, thereby reducing the crime rate of the naon, in

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the long

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