In companies promotions to high positions should be given to employees inside the company not to someone from outside an new hiring. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that an experienced employee within the organisation should be given advancements in their rank rather than hiring new people from outside.
This
essay agrees with this
statement because workforce
Correct article usage
the workforce
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
the
integral part of company productivity and doing so will make them feel rewarded and motivated.
The already existing staff adapted Change the article
an
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to the
the
new changes quickly since they Change preposition
to the
know
the Wrong verb form
knew
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organisation's
organisation
policies very well. Change noun form
organisation's
This
will give them ability
to show the management their talent and their handling capacity Change the article
the ability
of
critical situations. They will be able to Change preposition
in
have
more contributions to the company. Verb problem
make
For
example
the experience and skill sets they acquired throughout the years will help them to solve the new challenges quickly for the newly appointed task Add a comma
example,
as a result
the goals of the company is
easily achieved.
Being Correct subject-verb agreement
are
on
Change preposition
in
the
higher position Correct article usage
a
also
give
them a larger salary to encourage the work-spirit and perhaps even make them more loyal to the firm. Being rewarded and appreciated will make them more motivated towards the job and they will come up with new ideas and automations which will help corporations in reducing manual efforts and time required for repetitive Change the verb form
gives
task
. Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
For example
, if staff is inspired they will proactively come up with the
new ideas to improve the quality which will result in more benefits for production and help in gaining Correct article usage
apply
trust
of the clients which Add an article
the trust
help
in building good client Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
relationship
.
In Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
conclusion
in-house staff should be given opportunities to move up in their position will help them to boost their confidence and corporations will Add a comma
conclusion,
be benefited
Wrong verb form
benefit
with
their new positive attitude by gaining more clients in a way achieving the annual targets.Change preposition
from
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