The verb does appears to be unnecessary here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It appears that full time is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb doing. Consider changing it.
The plural verb illustrate does not appear to agree with the singular subject the bar chart. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It seems that post graduate is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
The word if doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase future study seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that study may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
The noun phrase voluntary working seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The word working doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.
It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb comparing. Consider changing it.
It seems that study may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.