Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is currently
contentious argument
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a contentious argument
over whether family is being
homed
cause or do harm to
harmed
by very high speed and pressure of contemporary Lifestyle I totally agree with
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opinion because the fast pace leads to less
time
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for families to be together and stress leads to arguments among family members. The main reason why I believe family
life
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is being a composed is because families have less
time
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to be with each other.
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is due to family members being busy at work and with their social lives as well as
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this
plural of "this"
these
people have many things they have to do these days
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as Checking email operating their online social status and so less.
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time
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Time
is left for family
life
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. To illustrate, I spend about 2 hours online every night attending to daily correspondence before chatting with my family members, whereas
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,
2 years ago, I would spend
time
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with my family as soon as I walked in the door. Another reason why
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
support the notion that families are being impacted negatively is that the pressure of
life
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these days means that even when families do get together arguments are more likely.
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is because everyone
feel
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feels
tired and they are more likely to
get irritated and to
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get irritated and
react to their heightened emotional
life
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level. In conclusion, I completely agree that the Rapid Pace and stressful nature of contemporary Lifestyle are having negative consequences
on
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for
life
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relationships.
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is because family members have less
time
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and when they are together they feel less relaxed. Given the
situtation it
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situation, it
situation it
seem
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seems
that family members should try to be more
spportive
furnishing support or assistance
supportive
to
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of
one another and
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also parents need to
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parents also need to
set aside regular
time
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for families to relax together.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modern life
  • fast pace
  • stress
  • negative effect
  • family bonds
  • working hours
  • conflicts
  • advancements in technology
  • distract
  • family time
  • financial pressures
  • living standards
  • strain
  • individuals
  • family activities
  • traditions
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