Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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result
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in the
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disappearance
of some
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languages
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. I strongly disagree it is important to
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preserve
them. It is true that there are some positives to using one
language
, most notably it would be easy to travel,
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business in daily life. A second remedy might be
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organize any treaty without the help of
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specialists
and reduce national boundaries.
This
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can rapidly
lead to develop our society. In spite of
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, I believe that linguists should try to save a rare
language
.
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all languages more
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a signi*cant
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signi*cant
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significant
role
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people. The ever-rising use of
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single
language
leads to be
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cause
the gravest problems.
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can be seen in
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, others lose quietly their own history and
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culture
. If a
language
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disappear
disappears
we will lose the rich cultural diversity. Governments
also
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conserve
traditions, customs and behaviour that are part of a country's history.
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,
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essential
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people's sense of sameness. Taking everything into consideration
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many people will be unaffected by the loss of
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make
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communicating
communication
easier in some cases. It would
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that all languages are
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significant
and should be preserved.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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