it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment shoukd parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • moral and ethical development
  • deterrent
  • undesirable behavior
  • psychological harm
  • corrective measure
  • positive reinforcement
  • age-appropriate consequences
  • instilling discipline
  • constructive punishment
  • punitive
  • consistent message
  • disciplinary process
  • sense of responsibility
  • cultural, social, and familial contexts
  • appropriate discipline
  • adapted to the individual
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