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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of the total music sold by three different ways between 2011 to 2010.overall ,it can be seen that the percentage of music sold through download and cds purchased decreased,while by stream increased over the given time period.

The given line graph illustrates the proportion of the total music sold by three different ways between 2011 to 2010.overall ,it can be seen that the percentage of music sold through download and cds purchased decreased,while by stream increased over the given time period.
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The line graph compares the
number of
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percentage
 of total
music
 sales by
method
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the method
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 of Streams ,
Dowloads
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Downloads
 and CDs purchased from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
 it can
been
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be
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 seen that the
percentage
 of total
music
 sales by
method
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the method
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 were higher than in
other
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the other
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 two
method
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methods
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at the whole
time
.
To begin
music
 sales by
method
 Stream,
Dowloads
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Downloads
Download
 and CDs were different at the same
time
.
However
,
while
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 Streams has zero
percentage
 in 2011
and
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,
Dowloads
 rise
into
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to
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 45-50
percentage
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per cent
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 from 2011 to 2014.
Meanwhile
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,Meanwhile
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 CDs
percentage
 rapidly decrease from 60
percentage
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percent
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 to 20
percentage
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percent
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. Interestingly,the Streams at the first
time
 has zero
percentage
 and
though
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through
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 the
time
its
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highly uplift from zero
percentage
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percent
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to 45-50
percentage
 for every eight
year
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years
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.
Dowloads
Correct your spelling
Downloads
Download
 in 2011 has 30
percentage
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percent
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 of total
music
 and increased
it
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from 30 to 45percentage,but in 2014
Dowloads
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Downloads
 rapidly decrease from 45
percentage
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percent
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 to 30
percentage
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percent
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and for every eight
year
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years
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with out
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without
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 any changes.CD purchased in 2011 was in 60
percentage
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percent
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 and has one of
highly
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high
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percentage
 in 2011 but in 2012
its
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it
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 rapidly decrease from 60
percentage
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per cent
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 to 20percantage
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, music, method, dowloads, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 16 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 3 times.
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