The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
proportion
of visitors to four famous destinations in Brighton, English within 30 years from 1980 to 2010.
We can see that 30% of tourists who came to Brighton for the festival in 1980 had slightly dropped to around 27% in 2010. Likewise
, Art Gallery also
witnessed a similar decline in terms of the visitors' proportion
, but much sharper, from a peak of about 37% in 1985 after a heightened
of 22%, it Wrong verb form
heighten
then
tailed off to just less than 10% in 2010. It was, therefore
, the least popular attraction among four
Correct article usage
the four
at the end
of the period.
By contrast
, the trend was largely reverse
for Pavilion and Pier. Wrong verb form
reversed
Although
only accounted for 10% of the total visited tourists in 1980, Pier's proportion
more than doubled at the end
of the period with some fluctuations during the years. The proportion
of tourists to Pavilion
Correct article usage
the Pavilion
also
increased with a marked rise and fall, from 23% in 1980 it skyrocketed to approximately 48% in 1995, followed by a shrink to just right above 30% in 2010 which is slightly higher than the Festival.
In summary, while
the percentage of visiting the Art Gallery and Festival reduced, an
apposite trend was seen in the other two places.Correct article usage
the
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