Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?

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Recently scientists
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Recently, scientists
worried about climate change have urged governments to introduce measures to reduce the greenhouse gas emissions that are seen as its main cause. Simultaneously, politicians and environmentalists have urged individuals to make changes to their lifestyle. I shall argue that governments and individuals should take
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responsibility for
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problem.
Firstly
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, industry accounts for a large proportion of the greenhouse gas emissions, and
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can only be controlled by government action. Measures could be taken to discourage pollution,
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as limiting or taxing the use of fossil fuels. Alternatively, subsidies could be offered to
industries
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Industries
to clean up their production processes. If these ideas were adopted, I believe that businesses would regard pollution as a financial issue.
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, only discussion between governments can ensure that solutions are successful. The Kyoto agreement,
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, tried to reach global agreement on how to address the problem. Without
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co-
operating
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operation
, it seems to me that efforts to reduce fuel consumption are unlikely to be effective.
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, national and international policies will only succeed if individuals
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change their lifestyle.
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, people could think more carefully about how they use energy in their
homes
where you live at a particular time
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. By using less electricity, installing energy-efficient light bulbs and electrical appliances, or investing in solar panels, individuals can make a real difference.
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, I think individual attitudes to transport need to change.
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of making short
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a journey for some purpose (usually including the return)
trips
by car, people could choose to walk, cycle, or take a bus. Since cars are a major source of the problem, changing our
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
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area would have a major impact. In conclusion, I would maintain that only a combination of international agreement, national policies, and changes in individual
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
will succeed in preventing
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damage to the environment.
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