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The grown of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

#shops #town #cities
Nowadays, expansion of the online shopping has been a severe issue, that individuals assuming that it will lead to none demand for the shops. But my point of view is that shops might not
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 value despite of online shopping in place. On the one hand, there are reasons that people are more likely to choose online shopping when it comes to purchase something. One reason is that it is more time -consuming more comfortable compared to going to
shops
Suggestion
the shops
 and carrying home. Another reason is that people could not find a different kind of clothes, mechanics in real shopping which is available in
online shopping
Suggestion
the online shop
online shop
online shops
. Viewed from a different angle, several reasons behind the shopping whom wholly vote it.
First
 and foremost,
that is
 the habit of the people to go to the shopping and buying things in real
atmosphere
Accept comma addition
atmosphere, this
this
 observed that by going shopping people more enjoyed
,
Accept space
,
 relaxed even avoid their household chores or work
,
Accept space
,
 evaluate stress and so on.
In addition
, going shopping is our traditional culture and people who purchase clothes online are not guaranteed which you can not find out may it fits you or suits you. To conclude, my own feeling is that, if online shopping exceed
that is
 not to say shopping in city and town will close.

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