The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.

The charts illustrate the

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of sports played by the

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(

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,

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and swimming) in the given period between 2008 and 2014 and the money spent by their parents.

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, the money was spent in pounds and the

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of

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was measured in millions.

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, the first figure was about the average money spent on

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's sports

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in 2008 parents spend an average of 20 pounds monthly. In the following 2 years, it slowly began to increase and went on increasing. Same way, it had reached nearly an average of 32 pounds monthly by 2014.

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, the

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chart showed that the statistic of

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had participated in 3 different sports

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Football

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,

athletics

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, and swimming. The engagement of

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in

athletics

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has experienced some fluctuation, meanwhile, swimming and

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participations were almost stable. In 2008, nearly 1

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children

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were involved in

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whereas

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the

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of swimmers was 2.3

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.

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, the

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of swimming

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was higher in

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initial phase, in 2011 the

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of

athletics

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and swimming were equal (2.5

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). The

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of

participation

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in

athletics

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was on rapid growth, but it started to fall by 2014 by nearly 1.5

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, at the same time, the

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of

participations

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in swimming has been increasing at the same speed.

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, In terms of

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it was found that mostly 8

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children

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had participated in 2008 and it has been running smoothly until 2009 after it showed a slight downfall of 1

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. Even though many were interested in the starting, it didn't go as it should be

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,

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was seen

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stable until 2010, it rose by 2

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by 2014.