Due to increase use of aeroplane, air pollution is increasing more and more airports are constructed. Some people say that government should reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, travelling by the
air
has become
preferred mode
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the preferred mode
of transport due to which more and more
airport
are constructed. Several people believe that it can be reduced by imposing
heavy tax
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heavy taxes
a heavy tax
on airlines, so that it can reduce
air
traffic
.
This
essay will disagree with the statement that more taxes should be imposed on flights and the reason related to
this
will be discussed in the following paragraph.
To begin
with the reason why government should not impose heavy tax,
first
of all,
it
it is
it's
become
burden
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a burden
on
the low income group
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the lower income group
lower income group
lower income groups
of the society. To be more specific, if the government increases the
taxation
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taxable
percentage on the flights
then
the price of fare definitely rise. It will not much effect on the high income group of society because they can easily afford the tickets even if the prices will become
high
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higher
.
However
, it will have
impact
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an impact
on
weak section
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weaker sections
weaker section
a weaker section
of society.
Thereforer
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Therefore
the number of passenger
travel
through the
plane
will
reduced
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reduce
and the income of
this
sector will fall.
As a result
economy of the country will decline, along with that if the flight would
decrease
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decrease, then
then
there should be not
need
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needed
of infrastructure for the
plane
that is
airport
, and numerous people lose their job and small business which
run
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runs
along with
airport authority
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airport authorities
the airport authority
.
Moreover
,
this
will lead the
traffic
problem on
road
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the road
roads
and in trains as well. To elaborate, if
tickets
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the tickets
of
plane
become
expensive
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more expensive
than people will definitely choose
alternate way
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an alternate way
of transport to
travel
for short or long distance which cause more
traffic
on the road and in the trains.
Also it
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Also, it
increase
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increases
the noise and
air
pollution. Bedside
this
, is a time consuming process,
for
instance if
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instance, if
a person travels Mumbai to Delhi it will hardly take one to two hours to
travel
through
plane
to reach the destination. On
other hand
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the other hand
, if the person
travel
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travels
same distance
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the same distance
by train or bus it
take
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takes
more time like one or two days to reach from Mumbai to Delhi.
plane
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Plane
journeyn
the act of traveling from one place to another
journey
is quite
expensive but
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expensive, but
it is
convenient source
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a convenient source
of
travel
. To conclude,
air
industry play a vital role in
growth
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the growth
of the economy so heavy taxation is not a solution to reduce noise pollution and
traffic
. It can be reduced by reschedule the flight and
airport
should be located far from the city.

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