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Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform?

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Some firms and organizations have made mandatory for their employees to wear
uniform
. Un
doubtedly following a
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Undoubtedly, following
uniform
 dress code throughout
organization
(s) have their own boon and bane. In my opinion, wearing
un
iform h
Suggestion
a uniform
as more advantages to both employees and employers than any disadvantages.
Firstly
,
uniform
 creates and develops a sense of belonging. An employee in
uniform
 is li
kely t
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more likely
o be mentally and morally more attached to their authority compared to workers in informal attire; in turn
this
 helps them bind more strongly toward their duties. In the world
uniform
 is implemented fro professions of utmost significance for maintaining order in society like police ,
m
Accept space
,
ilitary and security.
This
 helps them realize the significance of their job. In similar fashion
uniform
 can help workers more focused on their duties.
Moreover
,
uniform
also
 can help create a good image of the
organization
 in the mind of clients and/or co
stumers.
someone who pays for goods or services
customers
People tend to remember firm(s) for longer time because of their
uniform
 combined with good services as compared to employees with random informal dress.
On the other hand
,
uniform
 can be bad for the employees as they can disclose their identities to criminals. People can be easily identified and traced easily; rendering them vulnerable to criminal activities. It is easier in the world where personal information is easily accessible through social media and/or internet to obtain more information about individual(s) belonging to particular
organization
.
This
 sometimes may compromise their security. In conclusion,
uniform
 brings more benefits to workers it may help them become more productive and committed to duties
this
 in turn can help the
organization
 become prosperous and successful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • uniform policy
  • corporate identity
  • work attire
  • equality
  • professionalism
  • brand image
  • personal expression
  • dress code
  • morale
  • team cohesion
  • security measures
  • cost implication
  • employee satisfaction
  • workplace culture
  • individuality
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