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the plans show the layout of the ground floor of museum in 1990 and 2010

The two pictures show changes to a Ground
floor
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 of
museum
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 over a period of 20 years We can see that the Ground
floor
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 of
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museum
Suggestion
the museum
a museum
 in 1990 and 2010 involved making a number of changes to the ground
floor
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 of the
museum
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,
Accept space
,
 mainly
in
Suggestion
on
 the eastern side. There are no plans to
change
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 staircase or external walls. The most noticeable
change
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 from the 1990 to the 2010
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museum
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
Museum
 in 1990 and 2010 involved making a number of changes to the ground
floor
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 of the
museum
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,
Accept space
,
 mainly
in
Suggestion
on
 the eastern side. There are no plans to
change
Use synonyms
 staircase or external walls. The most noticeable
change
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 from the 1990 to the 2010

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