The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart gives information about the
proportion
of
carbohydrates
,
protein
and fat in different diets. It is noticeable that the
proportion
of
carbohydrates
in
healthy
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diet
and
healthy
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a healthy
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diet
for sport is more than
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two parts.
By contrast
, the percentage of
carbohydrates
is the same as
protein
.
Except
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the 40% of
protein
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in
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average, the
proportion
of
protein
is
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for the
second
in the other two
diet
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.
Also
, whatever in which
diet
, the
proportion
of fat is the least. The
number of
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the
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percentage of fat both in
healthy
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a healthy
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diet
and
average
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the average
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diet
is 20, and it is 15% in
healthy
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a healthy
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diet
for sport. In summary, the
proportion
of
carbohydrates
,
protein
and fat is roughly similar in these three diets.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, carbohydrates, protein, diet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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