The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart gives information about the
proportion
of carbohydrates
, protein
and fat in different diets.
It is noticeable that the proportion
of carbohydrates
in healthy
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a healthy
diet
and healthy
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a healthy
diet
for sport is more than other
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the other
By contrast
, the percentage of carbohydrates
is the same as protein
.
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the protein
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, whatever in which diet
, the proportion
of fat is the least. The number of
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healthy
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a healthy
diet
and average
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the average
diet
is 20, and it is 15% in healthy
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a healthy
diet
for sport.
In summary, the proportion
of carbohydrates
, protein
and fat is roughly similar in these three diets.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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