The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart gives information about the

proportion

of

carbohydrates

,

protein

and fat in different diets. It is noticeable that the

proportion

of

carbohydrates

in

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diet

and

healthy

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diet

for sport is more than

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two parts.

By contrast

, the percentage of

carbohydrates

is the same as

protein

.

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the 40% of

protein

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in

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average, the

proportion

of

protein

is

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for the

second

in the other two

diet

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.

Also

, whatever in which

diet

, the

proportion

of fat is the least. The

number of

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the

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percentage of fat both in

healthy

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diet

and

average

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diet

is 20, and it is 15% in

healthy

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a healthy

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diet

for sport. In summary, the

proportion

of

carbohydrates

,

protein

and fat is roughly similar in these three diets.