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Band 2.5

A few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the use of others is rapidly declining. Is it a positive or negative development?

The above diagrams illustrate the current and proposed
water
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 supply plan of the Australia.
In
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At
 present,
main supply
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the main supply
 of pure
water
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 depends on the
Dam
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/Storage, which
fulfills
put in effect
fulfils
 the requirements of the household, shops, and the factories in the
city
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.
In addition
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, there is a path to direct the
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water
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 into the river
also
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. Apart from that, two different paths are directed to the
water
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 treatment plant in order to bring
waste
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water
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 from the
city
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 and
Dam
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 storage. Alternatively, there is
significant method
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a significant method
the significant method
 introduced to reuse the
waste
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water
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 which will be removed from the
city
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 in
future
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plan
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planning
. In
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future both
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future, both
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waste
water mixed with waste matter
wastewater
water
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 and
storm
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water
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 will be received from
water
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 treatment plant
parallelly
being everywhere equidistant and not intersecting
parallel
parallels
 in order to recycle.
Then
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 it will pump again to the
city
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 as pure
water
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 to cater to the
city
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 requirement. The
Dam
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, pure
water
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 supply will be remaining same as
present
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the present
. In the
future
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, there will not be a
storm
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water
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 line to the river as today.
Instead
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 of that it will be directed to reusing process. The
waste
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water
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 line from the
Dam
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 storage will be
also
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 removed. It can be observed that total
waste
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water
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 and
storm
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water
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 will be reused in
future
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 architecture.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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