Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subject that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

This
generation is changing into a more modern world, as it is the expense and the respect for each conditional related field is growing, in spite of whatever students choose to study.
However
, some people still believe that students should be studying the
accountable which
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accountable, which
is related to science and technology only, so that it can be useful in near future.
Although
, I think that, people's choice and passion matters in every aspect. People have rights to choose their passion and likes according to their choice. Society doesn't have rights to impose any students to choose specific things. Every susceptible has their own place and role in
this
world, whether it's in a form of arts, science or commerce. These subjects play a their own significant role in the in the society.
For instance
, if the whole world chose to go advance and chooses to be more scientific and technological
then
who plays the role in arts and business. It might loose its amount and ethics. As
this
era
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
area
is moving towards more advancement of science and technology people are adapting more technological lifestyle.
Thus
, it's
has
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had
many disadvantages as well as many advantages. Science is everywhere. Though it's has more value and scope than other streams.
That is
why people give more priority to the students who choose to study
this
exposed. To conclude, despite of all advantages
,
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,
every aspect of these fields has its own meaning. So, society should not underestimate and should not force students to choose any particular subject
instead
try to understand and respect their choice because there should be
balance
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a balance
in everything.

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