The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates,
water
consumption in Australian cities and different level of uses
of Fix the agreement mistake
use
water
.
Starting with higher water
uses in Australia
cities was Parth. There was 300 Correct your spelling
Australian
kilolitet
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kiloliter
water
consume
in Wrong verb form
consumed
a
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the
last
year. Similarly
agricultural area Add a comma
,Similarly
was tack
67% of Change the verb form
was tacked
was tacking
water
use in a same time period. However
, Adelaide and Brisbane was almost same
consumption of Correct article usage
the same
water
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apply
a
same time, Melbourne and Canberra Correct article usage
the
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were
lowest
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the lowest
water
users in
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apply
last
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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