THE TWO MAPS BELOW SHOW ROAD ACCESS TO A CITY HOSPITAL IN 2007 AND IN 2010. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES, AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT.

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The two maps show how the road accessing a hospital has changed during the years; specifically, they show two different situations, in 2007 and in 2010. The three main roads, namely Ring Road, Hospital Road, and City Road still exists in 2010, but there have been many alterations in three years. The major changes occurred on Hospital Road, in which two roundabouts were introduced: one of them is at the intersection with Ring Road, and the other at the intersection with City Road.

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, the six old bus stops have been dismantled, while a new bus station has been created on the left side of Hospital Road itself.

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, the old car park, which was for both staff and public, is now reserved for staff. A new public parking area has been introduced on the right of the city hospital, its access is on Ring Road, the one surrounding the hospital itself.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

traffic flow
road access
ring road
bus stops
bus station
congestion
parking facilities
pedestrian crossings
vehicular flow
organizational structure
accessibility
enhancements
configuration
dedicated
diverting traffic

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THE TWO MAPS BELOW SHOW ROAD ACCESS TO A CITY HOSPITAL IN 2007 AND IN 2010. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES, AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Other say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Disucss both these view and give your own opinions.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

An increasing number of professional, such as teachers and doctors are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What are the reasons for this trend? What effect does it have on the countries professionals are leaving

Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty. So rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?