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THE TWO MAPS BELOW SHOW ROAD ACCESS TO A CITY HOSPITAL IN 2007 AND IN 2010. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES, AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT.

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The two maps show how the road accessing a hospital has changed during the years; specifically, they show two different situations, in 2007 and in 2010.  The three main roads, namely Ring Road, Hospital Road, and City Road still exists in 2010, but there have been many alterations in three years.  The major changes occurred on Hospital Road, in which two roundabouts were introduced: one of them is at the intersection with Ring Road, and the other at the intersection with City Road.
Also
, the six old bus stops have been dismantled, while a new bus station has been created on the left side of Hospital Road itself.
In addition
, the old car park, which was for both staff and public, is now reserved for staff. A new public parking area has been introduced on the right of the city hospital, its access is on Ring Road, the one surrounding the hospital itself.

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