Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowdays
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Nowadays
people like to travel fast and they avoid long ways. Whereas there is some disadvantages as air pollution and high possibilities of accidents. Let us discuss some solutions for reducing problems and dangers of motorways.
Firstly
, one reason for the problem which damage and cause
for
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to
the environment.
However
In cars chemical had been used which is the main reason for air pollution.
For instance
, some families who lived
near by
close at hand
nearby
the
highways most
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highways, most
of people start using friendly cars like electric vehicles and try to use public transport and their personal vehicles in less.
Therefore
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Therefore, this
this
solution will help for reduction of pollution.
Secondly
, another threat is the high rate of accident in motorways because some people drive
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
fast
everytime
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every time
, even in bas weather and some people take
liquior
an alcoholic beverage that is distilled rather than fermented
liquor
liqueur
drinks and
then
frive
operate or control a vehicle
drive
car
its
it is
it's
also
a main reason for accidents.
for
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For
instance
people
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peoples'
studies about the more reasons at
people
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peoples'
death that was accidents.
there
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There
is a solution for reduction of these accidents
that is
reduce
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reducing
the speed limits and
dont
do not
don't
drink and drive.
Therefore
, in
this
ways
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way
we can save many
individuals
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individual
lives.
in
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In
conclusion, motorways can be
benificial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
only by following the safety rules
this
solution ensure that people can get
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
from motorways without taking any risks.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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