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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 diagram shows a
machine
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 based on
water
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 wave
energy
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 and its location options. It's clear from the diagram that the
water
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waves
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 can produce
an
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electrical
energy
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 throw
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wave-
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a wave-energy
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energy
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machine
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, which
depend
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depends
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 on
air flow
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airflow
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 and
turbine
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a turbine
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.
According to
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 what is shown, the
wave-
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energy
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machine
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 has a hole at the bottom in the opposite direction of
water
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waves
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 to allow
water
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come
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 in.
This
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water
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 wave generates an air flow Stream, which moves turbines. And in turn, the turbines will move the internal engine of
electricity
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the electricity
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 generator and produce
an
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electrical
energy
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. The other diagram views the suitable location options
of
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for
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 the
wave-
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energy
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machine
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. The appropriate location depends
on
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apply
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especially on
waves
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. Meaning, if the
water
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waves
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 are large,
it
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they
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 will generate a high output,
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this
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which
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 means it needs a huge
wave-
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energy
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machine
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 which
demand
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demands
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 a high installation cost. And vice versa.
To sum up
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, we could say that the
wave-
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energy
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machine
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 is a useful
machine
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 aid in producing
energy
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 from
the
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environment
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 resources. The
wave-
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energy
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machine
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 size and cost depend on
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water
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the water
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 level and
a
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the
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 magnitude of the
waves
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, water, energy, waves, wave-energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 7 times.
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