Would you prefer an interesting job with low pay or a boring job with a high salary? Explain.

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Even some people say that we can live only with love, the truth is that we cannot. We need money and
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why if I must choose, I would prefer a boring job with a high salary
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of an interesting one but lowered paid. In the
first
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place, figures show that inflation rates rise constantly, making our purchase power diminish and get harder to keep in line an average family budget.
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situation reinforces the idea that we need higher salaries.
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, I can counteract the boring tasks in creating new ones. Having a boring job allows us to save time to think of ways to improve our results.
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, we can re-think our procedures and work on ways to cut costs and resources to save money for the company.
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, with a high salary we have access to buy all we need and more. A low wage,
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, is harmful for the familiar and country's economy and
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, non desirable. In conclusion, we live with money not with dreams of an entertaining job.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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