The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
By contrast
, the figure for DVD and Blu-ray experienced opposite movements. In 2002, the sales
of DVDs was
the lowest number with almost 50,000 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
sales
. This
figure then
experienced a dramatic increase and reached a peak of over 210,000 sales
in 2007, before hitting a slight fall to 180,000 sales
in 2011. Likewise
, blu-ray saw an
Change the article
a
consistently
climb from around 0 in 2007 to approximately 12,000 Change the word
consistent
sales
in 2011Submitted by thaouyen123678 on
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