many parts of the world people are relying more and more on prepared food from grocery stores and restaurants because they are too busy to cook at home .this is bad because home cooked food is much better for us to what extend do you agree or disagree ?

In todays modern world, most of the people busy in their work or daily activities provided that it as become very difficult for them to cook at home. In order to save time most of the individuals prefer to eat outside from a restaurant or get prepared food from grocery stores. According to me, it is not a good idea to eat outside because restaurant food or grocery stores, food damage our health to some extend and there are various reasons why we should avoid eating outside.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutritional value
  • Fast-paced lifestyle
  • Culinary tradition
  • Processed foods
  • Meal prep
  • Cultural erosion
  • Financial expenditure
  • Health-conscious
  • Ready meals
  • Time constraints
  • Health implications
  • Food industry
  • Culinary skills
  • Mindful eating
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